Asyndeton

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The Quintessential example as...

I think it would be the ultimate archetype as.....

"Breathless, voiceless, scarcely alive, drained, exhausted."

The end of an enjoyable themed argument :D

Posted by Anonymous on Tue, 01/01/2013 - 09:37
inconceivably amazing as...

I think it would be a true literary marvel as, uh...

yeah, I can't make that any more succinct.

Posted by Anonymous on Fri, 12/14/2012 - 07:02
More than single word

Can an asyndeton be more than a single word?

i.e. "Breath gone, voice gone, he lay scarcely alive, drained and exhausted"

Posted by Anonymous on Fri, 08/24/2012 - 17:36
I think it'd be better like

I think it'd be better like "Breath gone, voice gone, he lay scarcely alive. Drained. Exhausted."

Posted by Anonymous on Fri, 09/14/2012 - 00:23
Even Better as....

I think it would be even better as "breath gone, voice gone, scarcely alive, drained and exhausted."

Posted by Anonymous on Thu, 09/27/2012 - 19:16
Not Exactly

To be an asyndeton, it cannot have "and". therefore:
"Breath gone, voice gone, scarcely alive, drained, exhausted."

But I do think it sounds much better with one word. For example:
"Breathless, voiceless, lifeless, drained, exhausted."

Posted by Anonymous on Thu, 01/17/2013 - 01:16
If you put three '-less'

If you put three '-less' words like that, it feels as if the next word should be 'drainless', which ruins the whole atmosphere :)

Posted by Anonymous on Mon, 02/04/2013 - 09:49
awful example that unfortunately springs to mind.

Eat. Pray.Love.

Posted by Anonymous on Thu, 06/21/2012 - 20:30

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