Authorial Intrusion

Definition:
Authorial Intrusion is an interesting literary device wherein the author penning the story, poem or prose steps away from the text and speaks out to the reader. Authorial Intrusion establishes a one to one relationship between the writer and the reader where the latter is no longer a secondary player or an indirect audience to the progress of the story but is the main subject of the author’s attention.

Example:
In many olden novels, especially in suspense novels, the protagonist would move away from the stream of the story and speak out to the reader. This technique was often used to reveal some crucial elements of the story to the reader even though the protagonist might remain mystified within the story for the time being.

13 thoughts on “Authorial Intrusion”

  1. Victor Hugo uses it a lot in The Hunchback of Notre Dame, as he describes the Parisian architecture of the 15th century – ”If the reader allows me, I will proceed …” etc.

  2. I read a book which, at the end of one chapter, would say: “I hope you flip the page.” And the next chapter would say: “Phew, you flipped the page.”

    1. Oh, I remember that book. It was a children’s book. But wasn’t that “Whatever you do, dont turn the page!” I think it was Grover from Sesame Street… Theres a Monster at the End of this Book.

  3. The short story “How to Transform an Everyday Ordinary Hoop Court into a Place of Higher Learning and You at the Podium” by Matt de la Pena is another example of authorial Intrusion.

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